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Bailey Holcomb

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Music Room

    I'm happy you wrote about music. I am a trumpet player, so I can definitely relate. I love the part leading up to the climax. Good job.

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sunny Day

    Guys! This was just a JOKE! Not a Real Poem!

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Chaos

    I love this. I love the repetition and internal rhyme.

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Him

    Thank you for your feedback. My poem "It's Over" is reality. Umm I wrote that to my ex-boyfriend to break up with him and all of it was true. I ...

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Perfection

    awww. I like this one too! Although I'm not so sure what leers means but still........good job. I like your poems. You make me feel like a wanna be. haha

    Dec 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If Life is But a Dream

    Wow! It seems like every poem I look at randomly, appears to be written by you. I love your poems!!! I would actually like to have a book of poems ...

    Dec 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter Dust

    I like it. I like the variety of large words. I like an expanded vocabulary. Snowflakes are such a wonderful thing to write about

    Dec 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Monster, A Feind...

    Hi. I like your poem. It's not the kind of poem that I'm used to.

    Dec 14, 2008


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